Home on the road/ Dom na cesti
Home on the road Dom na cesti
I lay in the dirt next to the road Ležah u prašini kraj ceste
Neither I saw his face Niti ja vidim lice njegovo
nor he saw mine. niti on vidje lice moje.
The stars came down and the air was blue Zvijezde sišle su i zrak bijaše plav
Neither I saw his hands Niti vidjeh ruke njegove
nor he saw mine. niti on vidje moje.
The East became as green as a lemon. Istok postane zelen kao limun.
Because of one bird, I open my eyes. Zbog jedne ptice otvorim oči.
Then I found out whom I have loved Tada doznah koga sam ljubila
my entire life. čitav život.
Then he found out whose poor hands Tada on dozna kome je ruke
he has hugged. grlio uboge.
And the man takes his bundle, and starts I uze čovjek zavežljaju i krenu
in tears toward his home. plačući u svoj dom.
And his home is dirt on the road, A njegov dom je prašina na cesti,
the same as my home. * kao i moj dom.
Vesna Parun
my translation*
I lay in the dirt next to the road Ležah u prašini kraj ceste
Neither I saw his face Niti ja vidim lice njegovo
nor he saw mine. niti on vidje lice moje.
The stars came down and the air was blue Zvijezde sišle su i zrak bijaše plav
Neither I saw his hands Niti vidjeh ruke njegove
nor he saw mine. niti on vidje moje.
The East became as green as a lemon. Istok postane zelen kao limun.
Because of one bird, I open my eyes. Zbog jedne ptice otvorim oči.
Then I found out whom I have loved Tada doznah koga sam ljubila
my entire life. čitav život.
Then he found out whose poor hands Tada on dozna kome je ruke
he has hugged. grlio uboge.
And the man takes his bundle, and starts I uze čovjek zavežljaju i krenu
in tears toward his home. plačući u svoj dom.
And his home is dirt on the road, A njegov dom je prašina na cesti,
the same as my home. * kao i moj dom.
Vesna Parun
my translation*
scarf: borrowed / blouse: vintage, pants: vintage + DIY, boots: Peko, bag: vintage, puffer/ gloves: no name |
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Great :)
ReplyDeleteDivna je poezija Vesne Parun! Kao i tvoje fotografije!
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Dear Ivana, many thanks for this touching poem. I got during reading even tears in my eyes. Thank you especially for your translation.
ReplyDeleteBut your look didn't bring tears in my eyes! I like you in this look and the scarf is such an elegant touch. I can imagine you were happy that you have worn the warm coat as it obviously was really windy.
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The photos were taken on International Women's day. It was a very windy day hence I was quite happy to have opted to wear a warm puffer.
DeleteWonderful ,love the blue Sky <3
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DeleteWhat an amazing poem, it really touched me.
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thank you so much. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it.
DeleteWow, so beautiful, love your poem. *__*
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thank you, but it is not my poem. I'm merely a translator.
DeleteAbsolutely loved your Poem Ivana, and you look beautiful :)
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thank you...the poem is by Vesna Parun. I only translated it.
DeleteGreat job on your poem :)
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it's not my poem
DeleteAh such a deep and meaningful work, I must puzzle on it a bit and see what my heart can divine. Very cute pictures too, dear :)
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ReplyDeleteStunning my lovely!! What a gorgeous coat and I enjoyed the translation too...beautiful!! I hope your week has been bliss!! Have a gorgeous weekend xx
ReplyDeletethank you Kizzy!
DeleteIt seems it was quite windy when you were taking photographs :) Anyway, the messy hair just add more charm and loveliness to you. Beautiful poem, thank you for translating.
ReplyDeletethank you Olga:)
DeleteThese are wonderful, lyrical verses. The poem is touching, indeed. I love the way you've translated it!
ReplyDeleteBesides, those photographs describe the mood of poem as well. It was a windy day as you have said, but this special effect plays into your hands:) It makes those photos more artistic:)
wind has a way of making the photos look interesting, so we must forgive it its down sides like ruining our hairdo:)
DeleteDear, that poem was beautiful! You are always amazing in translating! I know it is a tasking thing to do and it amazes me how good you are at it. Thanks a lot for sharing to us another poetry our soul can digest! You look great even on windy day btw! <3
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thank you so much...lately I've been sharing more poetry because everyone seems to enjoy it so and besides this is a fun way to make Croatian authors more accessible. Literature of nations that are outside the old colonial European/American circle is often ignored in any serious study.
DeleteStill cold there? Great cosy coat!
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yes, still quite windy...I don't know where the Mediterranean climate is hiding and when it will kick in.
DeleteNice look and thank you for translating that lovely poem. It looks like it's still very cold there. Here it is starting to warm up a little. I hope the warmer weather comes to you soon
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I don't know is it me but I'm really still quite cold. I can't wait for the Spring to come.
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DeleteI love how your scarf made a statement in this outfit. Pretty! :)
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Nice poem, Ivana! Love your hair, dear! xoxo
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DeleteThanks for translating this pretty poem for us and you look so cute and cozy in that outfit! Happy weekend Ivana!
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thank you so much:) Happy weekend!
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem and translation, I found it moving to read. I also love your outfit, those types of coats are difficult to pull off, but you do it well. Enjoy your weekend. Madison :)
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DeleteNadam se da je konačno odzvonilo ovim zimskim jaknama, ja sam se danas uvukla u kaput i ne dam se više natrag :))
ReplyDeletei ja se nadam, ali bojim se da ću svoje još nositi jer u Mostaru puše stalno od kada sam došla...ja bi natrag u Zagreb sada:)
DeleteI really needed a warm coat like yours :) I like to see you in beige!
ReplyDeleteI think beige is a good choice for us girls with olive complexion.
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DeleteOh Ivana, you already know how much of a fan I am of the poems that you featured on your blog. This is another one which I really like, the meaning is just so touching and lovely, you always do such a great job in translating.
ReplyDeleteYou look lovely despite the wind and you pulled off the jacket well! I would have look like I'm drowning in it. LOL!
Have a lovely weekend, Ivana! xx
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I'm glad you liked the poem dear, I'm translating another one and it will be up on the blog soon...I do hope I'm not getting boring with this puffer as I wear it all the time.
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Beautiful and moving poem, I enjoyed reading it. Love your coat, so thick and warm. Have a great weekend Ivana! xo
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Deletei love that pants ivana. :) also, nice poetry! :))
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thank you dear...I painted these jeans myself!
DeleteLovely poem. I can't believe it is still cold in your neck of the wood. I bet your can't wait for spring/summer :D.
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Fortunately, today Spring has finally arrived.
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