You whose hands are more innocent than mine
It is said that the greatest loves are often tragic. When I think of love stories, I often think of Vesna Parun, a Croatian poetess, and one of her poems in particular. It is a poem that Vesna wrote to the wife of the man that was her only love and it is the most tender of poems that I have ever read. This poem has been translated by many, but today I have felt like translating it myself.
You whose hands are more innocent than mine, poem by Vesna Parun
You whose hands are more innocent than mine
you who is as wise as the complacence itself.
you who can read better than myself
loneliness from his forehead
You who can chase away
from his face
the slow shadows of doubt
like the spring wind chases away
the shadows of clouds over the hill.
If your embrace gives courage to the heart,
and your tights end the pain,
if your name is the heaven
to his thoughts, and your throat
shade to his resting place
and the night of your voice
an orchard
still untouched by storms.
Then stay by him
and be more devoted than any
that had kissed him before you.
Fear the echoes that approach
the innocent beds of love.
and be tender to his dream,
under an invisible mountain
at the edge of the roaring sea.
Walk his shore. Be met
by the saddened dolphins.
Roam his forest. The friendly lizards
will do you no harm.
And the thirsty snakes that I had tamed
will be humble before you.
May the birds that I had kept warm sing to you
in the nights of hard frosts.
and may you be caressed by the boy
that I had protected from the spies on an empty road.
May you enjoy the fragrance of the flowers
that I had watered with my tears.
I am not there to meet the most beautiful age
of his manhood. His fertility
I have not taken into my bosom
that has been ravaged by the stares of
cattle drivers on the fairs
and by greedy outlaws.
I will never take by the hand
his children. And the stories
that I have prepared for them long ago
perhaps I will tell to the poor little bears
left over to the black forest.
You whose hands are more innocent than mine,
be tender to his dream,
that has remained innocent.
But let me see him
his face as the unknown years
decent on it.
And tell me sometimes something about him,
so I don't have to ask strangers,
that wonder at me, and the neighbors
that pity my patience.
You whose hands are more innocent than mine,
stay by the head of his bed,
and be tender to his dream!
Ova pjesma je predobra :)
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